Sol Luckman
Readers
familiar with Ernest Hemingway’s fiction tend to be surprised and
vaguely ill-at-ease when entering the lush textual vegetation of his
posthumously published novel THE GARDEN OF EDEN. Begun in 1946 and left
unfinished at the time of the author’s death in 1961, THE GARDEN OF
EDEN has generated a healthy amount of scholarly debate since its
sensational appearance in 1986. Bristling with a new challenge, critics
have been drawn primarily to two topics that the text itself
foregrounds: the gender-bending theme linking the young
writer-protagonist David Bourne to his new wife Catherine in an
incestuous love-hate relationship; and the formal characteristics of
this oddly “postmodernist” novel which combines Hemingway’s signature
realism with intense metafictional experimentation worthy of Italo
Calvino or John Barth.
This is not to suggest, as some critics have done, that THE GARDEN OF
EDEN represents a radically unprecedented departure from the standard
Hemingway novel we all know and love. Gender-bending, particularly
under its outward sign of the “crossing” haircut, threads conspicuously
through THE SUN ALSO RISES (1926), A FAREWELL TO ARMS (1929) and FOR
WHOM THE BELL TOLLS (1940), before reaching a kind of apotheosis in THE
GARDEN OF EDEN.
As for metafiction, one need look no further than to the most
anthologized of Hemingway’s stories, “The Snows of Kilimanjaro” (1936),
to trouble our accepted notions of Hemingway as the past century’s
arch-realist. In fact, the principal metafictional technique employed
in THE GARDEN OF EDEN with such bewildering effect was already fully
integrated into “The Snows of Kilimanjaro.” In both texts we find
framed within the basetext a summarized meta-narrative which takes
place inside the creative subject’s consciousness: just as we
experience David writing his African stories, and at the same time
somehow “read” the stories themselves, we follow Harry, who is dying of
gangrene in Tanzania, through a series of “unwritten” narratives that
he imagines in his delusion. And in both novel and story the dialogue
between basetext and metatext is productive of meanings that a purely
“linear” narrative would be hard-pressed to convey.
Reception of THE GARDEN OF EDEN has been spotty at best, with most
reviewers agreeing that the novel as published by Scribners (following
a controversial editing out of approximately a thousand pages of
manuscript) ultimately fails to deliver the goods as a complete work of
art. I disagree with this rather cavalier assessment, but as Kant
warned us long ago, we have no business arguing tastes to begin with.
What interests me in this novel, editorially sanitized though it may
be, is the leap Hemingway takes into a sustained (if not altogether
new) dialogized universe in which a wide range of binarisms are
collapsed and then all mixed up together like the bouillabaisse his
characters so decadently consume. THE GARDEN OF EDEN, as its name
implies, is a world apart, a textual universe where traditional
distinctions—as between masculine and feminine, self and other, life
and art—hold no sway, where straight lines become circular and end
where they began, where the comfortable logic of either/or is replaced
by the disconcerting possibility of both/and. Nowhere is this
perplexing illogic more evident than in David and Catherine’s bizarre
sex life, whose lack of description in the novel has, according to
Comley and Scholes, led “one befuddled critic to suggest that ‘somehow,
she sodomizes him.’”
Thankfully, reviewers agree that Hemingway, whether or not his tackle
was sufficient to the task at hand, was after bigger fish than many
have given him credit for. “Nowhere else in Hemingway’s work is the
intricate relationship between reality and imagination, between self
and art, so originally explored,” writes Allen Josephs, adding, “If
William Faulkner had read [this] book, I doubt he would have remarked
on Hemingway’s lack of ‘courage to get out on a limb of
experimentation.’” Hemingway himself was clearly aware of the tangled,
nonlinear implications of his novel, as well as of the problems of
interpretation it might pose, for he was fond of pointing out to
critics during the period he was composing THE GARDEN OF EDEN,
“Gentlemen, you are criticizing my arithmetic when I am long ago into
calculus.”
As this quip suggests, and as criticism has abundantly borne out, the
tendency to read THE GARDEN OF EDEN as a symbolic algorithm—whether
step-by-step back into the author’s biography, or more problematic
still, as a self-evident example of the author’s famous “hero code”—has
been strong. Nowhere has this tendency to pigeonhole the novel been
more patent than in the readings given to David and Catherine Bourne.
It has generally been acknowledged that both characters are, despite
Hemingway’s cited distaste for “composite characters,” among the most
synthetic creations in recent literature.
As a rather scantily disguised rewriting of F. Scott Fitzgerald’ TENDER
IS THE NIGHT, a subject to which I will return, THE GARDEN OF EDEN
positions David and Catherine as surrogates for, respectively,
Scott/Dick Diver/Gerald Murphy and Zelda/Nicole Diver/Sara Murphy. At
the same time David is clearly a projection of Hemingway, similar in a
myriad of respects to the narrator of A MOVEABLE FEAST, just as
Catherine represents, variously, at least three of the author’s wives.
To complicate matters further, Marita, the “dark girl” brought in by
Catherine to be her “Heiress” when she leaves, suggestively recalls two
of these same wives, Pauline Pfeiffer and Mary Welsh, both of whom were
bisexual and entered Hemingway’s life as the third term in adulterous
love triangles which prefigure THE GARDEN OF EDEN.
Where critics have typically struggled has been in the interpretation
of David and Catherine, a process which has often resulted in an
elaborate form of choosing sides between the two. According to this
either/or logic—which the text itself resolutely seeks to
deconstruct—the novel must have a protagonist and an antagonist, a good
guy and a bad guy (or a good guy and a bad gal, or vice versa).
The traditional approach, followed by Josephs, for example,
is to read David as the hero and Catherine as the transgressive
she-devil who, to culminate her long list of sins against the
artist-hero, burns David’s African stories, an act which Josephs calls
“one of the most shattering acts of cruelty anywhere in Hemingway’s
fiction.” At the opposite end of the critical spectrum, Steven C. Roe,
basing his study (“Opening Bluebeard’s Closet”) on the manuscript, has
taken it upon himself to thoroughly demonize David as a monstrously
egomaniacal Bluebeard figure who sacrifices his wives to his art and
represents what Hemingway “feared most about himself.”
Hemingway does at times make David out to be a Bluebeardesque
“monster,” even in the expurgated published version, as Catherine at
one points makes explicit. Nevertheless, although Roe admits that
“Catherine, to a lesser degree, becomes ‘monstrous’ herself,” his
reading of the novel—in addition to ignoring the evidence that David
represents to some extent a critical parody of Fitzgerald—tends to
polarize David and Catherine in a way I’m arguing against in this essay.
Attempting to establish a middle ground between these extreme
interpretations, Kathy Willingham, in
“Hemingway’s THE GARDEN OF EDEN: Writing with the Body,” has argued for
a feminist reading of Catherine which would place her alongside David
as the text’s “other” artist. “GARDEN unequivocally constitutes a
unique and moreover, dual, Künstlerroman,” she writes.
That it traces the development of David’s artistic life is an idea
which most critics enthusiastically embrace. However, GARDEN also
portrays Catherine’s artistic odyssey, and this becomes evident by
analyzing the components of the novel which Hemingway suppresses. By
submerging Catherine’s artistic quest beneath aspects of the narrative
foregrounding David’s development, Hemingway mirrors a central thematic
concern, namely the suppression of female creativity. To focus only on
David’s narrative and point of view not only neglects Catherine’s
artistic evolution, but constitutes a failure to acknowledge the text’s
“Other” where free play and creativity exist.
Willingham persuasively demonstrates how Catherine subverts David’s
“patriarchal” moratorium on her creativity by not only scripting the
novel which David in effect transcribes, but also by creating her own
text using her body as prima materia. Recognition of Catherine’s status
as (oppressed) writer is vital to a healthy understanding of THE GARDEN
OF EDEN. Nancy Comley and Robert Scholes, whose rereading of Hemingway’s novel
focuses precisely on those moments of ambiguity where “normative”
notions of gender and identity are elided, unfortunately tend to
overpsycholanalyze the author, interpreting Catherine less as an
artist-figure than as “the puritanical castrating mother who destroys
her boy-man’s connection to the primitive.”
Similarly, Willingham’s strict essentializing of the feminine and the
masculine, her insistence on reading Catherine solely in terms of
David’s “Other,” runs the risk of once again forcing a choice between
the two as creative (or for that matter, destructive) models. But the
text repeatedly stresses the paradox that David and Catherine not only
represent opposing versions of the artist, locked in war-like struggle,
but that they also are the same artist.
“Why do we have to go by everyone
else’s rules?” Catherine asks David early in the novel. “We’re us.”
“Maybe I’d better go back into our world,” she tells him a bit later,
“your and my world that I made up; we made up I mean.” Finally, toward
the end of the novel, we read from David’s perspective: “Catherine was
not his enemy except as she was himself in the unfinding unrealizable
quest that is love and so was her own enemy ... She turns my
flank so skillfully then finds it is her own and the last fighting is
always in a swirl and the dust that rises is our own dust” (emphasis
mine; Faulkneresque verbiage Hemingway’s).
Sporting identical haircuts and suntans, sharing the same lover,
swapping sexual roles back and forth, both ravenously hungry and
fearful of time, David and Catherine’s individual boundaries are
blurred over and over again in THE GARDEN OF EDEN. Mark Spilka makes a
strong case for reading these characters in virtually Jungian terms, as
simultaneously animus and anima of the author’s androgynous creative
psyche. Although such psychological readings usually give me
goosebumps, there’s a lot to chew on in Spilka’s model—not because it
provides a vision of some kind of transcendental “truth,” but because
Hemingway himself obviously thought in these “mirroring” terms.
Viewed from this perspective, Catherine’s mention of “the world we made
up” shouldn’t be taken lightly: THE GARDEN OF EDEN is very much a dual
creation, a product of the literal and figurative marriage between
David, who transcribes the travel narrative that makes up the novel,
and Catherine, who directs the narrative’s plot and stars in its pages.
The novel which ends with David and Catherine’s impending divorce
paradoxically represents their most complete union—if not the child
they were unable to have—thus concluding on a thematic level a
logic-defying loop which in every way parallels the type of illogic
inherent in the self-begetting text.
I will return to the relationship between form and content in THE
GARDEN OF EDEN, but first I would like briefly to address the notion of
the Garden evoked in the title. In 1948, after finishing the greater
part of a first draft, Hemingway remarked to a friend that the novel
was about “the happiness of the Garden that a man must lose.” This
statement has tempted more than one critic into the problematic
assumption that there’s a garden in this text to begin with, one which
is lost over the course of the narrative to be replaced by the bitter
fruit of wisdom. “Rather than a coincidentia oppositorum or the homo
totus of Jungian psychology, which are metaphors for fulfillment and
integration,” writes Josephs, “David and Catherine’s experiments expose
the disintegration that comes with the loss of the garden and the curse
of human sexuality. It is no coincidence that David comes to call her
Devil.”
While admitting this to be one possible interpretation of the Garden as
a symbol, with such a contradictory, polyvalent narrative we should
always be wary of oversimplifying. Another way of reading the Garden,
and one I think is suggested by the very possibility of a reading like
the one sketched above in this novel structured on the mirror image, is
its exact opposite: that there is no foundational Garden in this text.
The hunger pangs that lead David and Catherine into the moral
wilderness of androgyny, instead of suddenly disrupting paradise, are,
as the first chapter makes abundantly clear, present as evil seeds from
the beginning.
In this interpretation David, who shares Catherine’s hunger, is as much
a Satan/Eve figure as Catherine herself—yet again inviting us to
consider the two as a single character. Speaking to himself in the
mirror following his first haircut and bleaching with Catherine, David
says, “All right. You like it ... Now go through with the rest of it
whatever it is and don’t ever say anyone tempted you or that anyone
bitched you.” Perhaps we hear an echo in this passage of Hemingway’s
letter to Fitzgerald in which he criticized TENDER IS THE NIGHT: “We’re
all bitched from the start.” In any case it doesn’t require much
imagination to see how David and Catherine are indeed bitched from the
start.
Consistent with the project of rewriting Fitzgerald’s novel, Hemingway
subtly implies that Catherine, like Nicole/Zelda, has spent time in a
Swiss psychiatric hospital; David’s past is similarly traumatic, as his
African stories leave little room to doubt. I’m suggesting that David
and Catherine enter the world of THE GARDEN OF EDEN already in a state
of fragmentation, and that the only integration or fulfillment in this
text—belated though it may be—results from the fulfillment of the
narrative premise itself: the only garden in this novel, in other
words, is THE GARDEN OF EDEN.
From this perspective it might be helpful to interpret Marita not
simply as a submissive nurse figure, as most critics have done, but
also as the textual embodiment of the dark, shadowy (because unseen)
Reader au sens large of the David/Catherine text. After all, Marita
spends the majority of her spare time (if we can use the phrase for the
idle rich) reading what David has written and Catherine scripted.
If this sounds like an example of overzealous criticism, perhaps it is.
One thing is certain: THE GARDEN OF EDEN, by consciously and
conspicuously foregrounding its formal characteristics, seems almost to
require us to interpret its thematic content in formal or artistic
terms. The opposite is equally true: the novel’s formal structuration
lends itself easily to a reflexive meditation on its own content.
We see this reciprocal process at work most plainly in the
relationship between gender economies and genre. Just as the plot
dynamics hinge on the interplay between the masculine and the feminine,
on a generic level the novel assumes the form of a complex dialogue
between mimetic and metafictional modes. Moreover, in strikingly
similar fashion to the blurring of gender and identity boundaries
discussed above, the contours between the mimetic and the metafictional
gradually run together until there’s no longer any distinguishing
between the travel narrative and the African stories which enter that
narrative in meta-form. The ultimate result of this mind- (and gender-)
bending process is, of course, the self-begotten novel, in which
basetext and metatext(s) are revealed as one and the same; but long
before the final page mimesis and metafiction have ceased to exist as
discrete categories. In Chapter Sixteen, for example, we find David at
work on the second of his African stories:
But the half past ten was on the watch
on his wrist as he looked at it in the room where he sat at a table
feeling the breeze from the sea now and the real time was evening and
he was sitting against the yellow gray base of a tree with a glass of
whiskey and water in his hand and the rolled figs swept away watching
the porters butchering out the Kongoni he had shot in the first grassy
swale they passed before they came to the river.
This passage adds reality and fiction to the long list of binaries
Hemingway throws out the window. Later, in conversation with Catherine,
David is described as “[listening] in the unreality that reality had
become.”
To return to the relationship between gender and genre, let us once
again consider David and Catherine—this time, however, from a more
strictly “literary” perspective. The point has been made that both
characters, in their own manner, are writer-figures. In David’s case
this is more self-evident than in Catherine’s, but the question
remains: what kind of writers are they? Depending on whether we ask
this question of the characters as they appear in the novel, or with
respect to the novel as it is “written” by the character we’ve called
David/Catherine, we get two very different answers.
In the first instance, David and Catherine represent contrasting
conceptions of the artist. Despite the metafictional function which
David’s African stories perform in the novel, it should be noted that
the stories themselves, as related by Hemingway’s narrator, are
essentially straightforward and mimetic, following a linear progression
through a series of described events. Corresponding to David’s
“realism” is its generic antithesis in the narcissistic body-text
produced by Catherine: her masculine haircuts foreground for the viewer
the fact that her “maleness” is merely the product of artifice, much as
metafiction serves as a reminder that what we’re reading isn’t really
“real.”
Catherine’s connection with metafiction comes tantalizingly close to
being made explicit at least twice in the text. In Chapter Six she
imagines herself in mise en abîme: “I was thinking so much about myself
that I was getting impossible again, like a painter and I was my own
picture.” Later, describing to David how she plans to have their hair
cut, her terminology is suggestive of other meanings: “It’s sort of
bevelled back from the natural line” (italics mine).
We might even go so far as to read David’s African stories—which probe his past and culminate in “the beginning of the knowledge of loneliness”—as
embodying the epistemological approach typically associated with a kind
of modernism, whereas Catherine’s self-creating, cosmetic “fictions”
would appear to have more in common with the ontological focus of
postmodernist aesthetics. Without couching his argument precisely in
these terms, Robert Jones hits upon the notion that THE GARDEN OF EDEN
“constitutes an important link between Modernism and Post-Modernism.”
As co-creators of THE GARDEN OF EDEN, David/Catherine represents a
third kind of writer, neither realist nor metafictionalist, but an
androgynous synthesis of the two combining an awareness of epistemology
with a fascination for ontology. By making the figure of androgyny thus
resonate on both thematic and formal levels, Hemingway not only blurs
the boundaries between masculine and feminine, self and other, art and
life—he virtually collapses distinctions between content and form.
Even stylistics enters into play at this point: Hemingway’s trademark
dialogue, which at first seems to be chiefly an aesthetic device,
begins to take on added significance when we consider how dialogue
functions as a trope for the interplay between the various binarisms
we’ve been discussing. The role that mirrors play should be more
closely examined as well. Throughout the novel mirroring serves as an
appropriate metaphor for the paradoxical coexistence of sameness and
difference, the virtual equivalence of reality and fiction, self and
other, male and female, meta and mimetic, that make up the very
quicksandy substance of THE GARDEN OF EDEN
The conflation of racial characteristics, as in the combination of dark
skin and light hair, should also be considered in this context.
According to Comley and Scholes, the Scribners text of the novel “does
its author a serious disservice” by all but eliminating an important
African subplot: “The obsession with tanning is connected with the
desire to reach a primal level of experience, some heart of darkness,
from which Euro-Americans have been cut off by their heritage of
enlightenment.” This quest for “something powerfully irrational” is
quite in keeping with the novel’s project of going beyond the limits
imposed by Cartesian thinking.
There’s a case to be made that this “new” kind of novel—which Hemingway
actually thought of at one point as forming a monumental
tetralogy—should be read as the author’s treatise on the art of the
novelist, especially when we compare David’s thoughts on writing with
Hemingway’s own artistic theories. The most obvious similarity between
character and author on the subject of aesthetics (there are many) is
their shared “iceberg theory,” which gets translated by David into an
image better suited to the equatorial climate he grew up in: “He wrote
[the story] exactly and the sinister part only showed as the light
feathering of a smooth swell on a calm day marking the reef beneath.”
On the other hand, there’s also a case to be made—and here we’re back
to the absurd logic of both/and—that THE GARDEN OF EDEN betrays
elements of self-parody in addition to its parody/critique of TENDER IS
THE NIGHT. Concerning overt self-parody, we run into the problem of the
manuscript versus the published novel. Josephs puts it euphemistically
when he writes that “at times the book almost seems an anthology of
Hemingway’s favorite topics and places.” It would be more to the point
if he had asked, “Just how many martinis and Perrier whiskeys do the
characters drink?” Is the novel intentionally self-parodic, or did
Scribners and its editor intentionally find the “Hemingway novel” they
went looking for in the manuscript?
That THE GARDEN OF EDEN represents a rewriting of Fitzgerald’s novel
has been generally acknowledged by critics. Spilka, following Arthur
Mizener’s insightful biography of Fitzgerald (THE FAR SIDE OF
PARADISE), refers to TENDER IS THE NIGHT, along with Kipling’s JUNGLE
BOOK, as among the novel’s “immediate sources,” on a par with its
direct biographical inspiration: Ernest and Pauline’s honeymoon at Le
Grau-du-Roi in 1927. Spilka traces Hemingway’s anxiety of influence to
two specific scenes in Fitzgerald’s novel: the “barbershop showdown”
where Tommy Barban confronts a half-shaven Dick Diver for Nicole’s
hand, and the “lesbian lark” in which a vaguely repulsed Dick rescues
his friend Mary North and Lady Caroline Sibley-Biers from jail after
they have disguised themselves as sailors and picked up two
unsuspecting girls. This seems as good a place as any to look for the
original impetus for THE GARDEN OF EDEN, although as Spilka also points
out, there’s more than enough documentation of transsexual haircuts,
hair bleaching and lesbianism in Hemingway’s biography to account for
his fascination with these subjects.
Obviously, many pieces of evidence support the claim that Hemingway was
writing in response to TENDER IS THE NIGHT, not least of which is the
fact that Hemingway was clearly obsessed by Fitzgerald’s novel, as he
was by Fitzgerald himself. Their entangled relationship—based on
admiration for each other’s work, a sense of competition out of
proportion to the circumstances, and quite possibly repressed
homosexual desire for one other—is reminiscent of the similar
connection between Melville and Hawthorne a century earlier. If
anything, Ernest and Scott’s “friendship” (I use the term loosely) has
generated more myths, wholly or in part, than that of their
nineteenth-century precursors, including such literary “myths” as
Tennessee Williams’ CLOTHES FOR A SUMMER HOTEL, Kaye McDonough’s ZELDA
and Hemingway’s own A MOVEABLE FEAST.
The barely submerged rewriting of the psychodrama between Scott and
Zelda in THE GARDEN OF EDEN is one of the novel’s most salient
features: a young writer’s career is threatened by his insane wife,
whose jealousy of his writing, combined with his suppression of her
creativity, pushes her to a series of vindictive acts against her
husband, including tempting him to drink so that his writing will
suffer. Bruccoli quotes Hemingway as telling Max Perkins shortly after
the publication of TENDER IS THE NIGHT:
Scott can’t invent true characters
because he doesn’t know anything about people ... he
has so lousy much talent and he has suffered so without knowing why,
has destroyed himself and destroyed Zelda, though never as much as she
has tried to destroy him, that out of this little children’s, immature,
misunderstood, whining for lost youth death-dance that they have been
dragging into and out of insanity to the tune of, the guy all but makes
a fine book, all but makes a splendid book.
Hemingway follows a similar narrative line in his depiction of Scott
and Zelda’s relationship in A MOVEABLE FEAST. Specific references to
Dick and Nicole of TENDER IS THE NIGHT abound in THE GARDEN OF EDEN,
the most blatant of which being Diver David’s repeated plunges into the
Mediterranean which resonate simultaneously on two very different
levels. Depending on how we interpret David’s diving, it’s possible to
read the novel in contradictory ways. Is diving here a metaphor for the
artistic enterprise as it should be undertaken, a heroic probing of the
depths of reality? or does it symbolize a narcissistic submersion in
one’s own particular fantasy? In other words, is David the courageous
artist-hero that some have claimed him to be, or is he an unsympathetic
victim of Hemingway’s irony?
It should be clear by now that the answer to both these questions is
yes. On the one hand, Spilka is surely accurate when he writes
that Hemingway
correctly identified Fitzgerald’s
“dangerous self-indulgence,” his importation of “feelings about his own
decline” into the character of Dick Diver, as a problem Hemingway would
himself have to face in his own version of the writer’s struggle with
“tragic” circumstances. Thus, David Bourne, his chief persona in THE GARDEN OF EDEN, would make of the act of writing a stoic buffer against
such circumstances and would stubbornly resist their debilitating
power. He would confront the hazards of androgyny that Fitzgerald had
only dimly understood ... and would overcome them through courageous
masculine artistry.
According to this account, David/Ernest manages to triumph over
“corrupting” feminine influence where Dick/Scott succumbs to an
emotional and artistic “crack-up.” But we also know that
Hemingway doesn’t exactly pull his punches when it comes to David, who
under the continual ironic blows of his author emerges with a black eye
or two himself.
Parody isn’t a word one encounters much in Hemingway criticism, but it
seems oddly appropriate in this novel. David’s complicity in his own
“tragedy”—his blindness not only to Catherine’s personal and artistic
needs, but to his own desires and needs as well, as paralleled by the
story of his betrayal of the elephant—is a trenchant replaying of
chapters out of both Fitzgerald’s and Hemingway’s lives. Thus by taking
aim at Dick Diver—whose overestimation of his ability to “heal” Nicole
is matched only by his underestimation of his emotional dependence on
her—Hemingway writes a novel that defies attempts at
categorization. Faced with an internally condradicted text which
represents at once ars poetica, critique and self-aggrandizement,
parody and self-parody, it’s hardly surprising that readers expecting a
more or less “straightforward” story feel perplexed and giddy-headed
when they turn the last page and replace the book on the shelf.
Fitzgerald once wrote that “the test of a first-rate intelligence is
the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and
still retain the ability to function.” In composing his most ambitious
novel, Hemingway clearly took Fitzgerald at his word. By collapsing a
host of distinctions—from masculine and feminine to form and content
to parody and self-parody—THE GARDEN OF EDEN moves beyond the limits
of Cartesian logic into a complex, non-Euclidean universe where
opposites attract and fuse together. The painful “change” that takes
place with and between David and Catherine leaves them paradoxically
more united in the aftermath of their separation—out of which THE
GARDEN OF EDEN is “born”—than they ever were in the precarious balance
of their “Edenic” honeymoon.
Nevertheless, the novel is far from ending on a happy note. We last
hear from Catherine in a letter to David that sums up, poetically and
lucidly, the madness that has driven her away and which threatens to
recur at any moment. As for David, who finishes the novel by rewriting
the African stories that Catherine has burned, it’s difficult not to
see in his heroic “recovery” a relapse into the kind of self-obsessed,
masturbatory blindness that led to Catherine’s exile from the garden in
the first place. “Are we the Bournes?” Marita asks him shortly after
Catherine has taken the train to Paris. The dialogue which follows her
question speaks worlds to the attentive ear:
“Sure. We’re the Bournes. It may take
a while to have the papers. But that’s what we are. Do you want me to
write it out? I think I could write that.”
“You don’t need to write it.”
“I’ll write it in the sand,” David said.
Consistent with its internal illogic, THE GARDEN OF EDEN ends in a
sense exactly where it began, with David and Marita’s marriage—exactly
like David and Catherine’s—ready to be washed away like writing in the
sand. In the final analysis we are left to contemplate the dangerous
isolation and selfishness inherent in the writerly enterprise. For
David, who “[cares] about the writing more than about anything else,”
remains sadly the same little Davey whom his father described as the
“iron-hearted little bastard. He meant to say cold-hearted but he
turned it kindly with his gently lying mouth. Or maybe he meant it.”
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